Wednesday, January 28, 2009

Observation 3

As a result from reading other student’s work, I have learned how to differentiate between a strong opening paragraph and a weak one.  I have also learned if the introductory paragraph includes a complete and strong thesis that will inform you in what order and what topic that will be discussed will be a better paper than one with out it.  I have been educated on using large words only when you know exactly what they mean.  In conclusion, as a writer and proofreader I have improved on my skills and grammatical work. 

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