observation 3

I made a few revisions in my paper after class on monday. One being the title because it was "Visual Rhetoric". The second revision I made was the detail. I did this because my paper was about 300 words short so I hade to make a more in depth analysis of the advertisement to be able to add more words to it. In doing these revisions I learned that papers need descriptive titles and I learned how to analyze every single part of a piece of visual rhetoric to be able to the minimum 1500 word requirement.