Observation 3

I read Amanda Brooke's essay about a government sponsored anti-meth commercial. Reading her paper instantly reminded me that different people have different styles of arguementation. As I read the paper, I started thinking about how I would have worded certain sentences differently than the way they were written. I also decided that a good introduction should map out the rest of your paper so that the reader knows what information they are about to receive. This way, they can read the paper and identify which pieces of evidence apply to which parts of the essay's thesis. I thought Amanda Brooke's paper was good, but I definately would have done it slightly differently, and I'm sure that if she wrote a paper on my piece of visual rhetoric, hers would be completely different from mine, too.