Observation 3

I went back through my visual paper and was able to change certain aspects of the paper to further my persuasive argument. I changed the order of the ideas that I presented for the persuasion of the visual advertisement. Also, I was able to see where I was not as persuasive in my analysis of the visual ad, so I was able to change some of the ideas I had to make them stronger and more concrete. These changes helped me to understand the importance of clarity and persuasion in my analysis of the visual advertisement.