Observation 3- Michael Schreiber

As I read Emily's paper I was impressed in the ways she argued her topic. She used less examples than I normally do, but she still got her points out by using many theories for a single example. I also read other people's papers in the class and have noticed that most of them think it is best to go deeper into detail about one aspect of a cartoon or video rather than bringing an array of topics and examples and just going over them for a brief amount of time. I also liked how many people made connections from one example to the next to further increase their point on a theory. I will take these things into consideration when I am writing my own papers because I feel I have never backed up my theories well, and I have seen how a few well placed examples described in detail can really persuade the reader.