Observation 3

I have learned about good rhetorical argumentation strategies through this paper. Having a clear thesis is very important. It needs to be clear and understandable and communicate the idea of the paper effectively. It should not be too broad but it should not be too specific. It is important to use proper rhetorical terms and theories and relate them effectively to the visual. My commercial is on a Mac vs. PC commercial. I need to use more specific examples using the rhetorical terms and making my observations more clear. My title should be something that clearly conveys the theme of the paper. Using specific examples and evidence is important and using the proper MLA format is necessary.