Ad Website:
http://www.advertisementave.com/tv/ad.asp?u_player=mediaplayer&adid=526This commercial shows Terry Tate as the "Office Linebacker," where he punishes employes for slacking on the job. His version of punishment is tackling men and women when they do not do their job correctly or as quickly as they should.
Thesis:
The commercial for Reebok uses many rhetorical devices and cannons such as narration and ethos to use as "attention getters" and to humor the audience.
You could use more interesting language to peak the reader's interest more in your paper, but you were clear on the fact that the topic used many rhetorical devices. The thesis is not too dense, it tells what rhetorical devices are going to be given in the paper. You did a good job on clearly specifying what direction you are going with this thesis. All and all FANTASTIC!!!!!!!!!!!!
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