1) your thesis describes the commercial and its rhetorical strategies, but it doesn't have enough detail. 2)your thesis is very general and doesn't include many details. 3)It is just an observation. 4)your thesis is too simplistic and you should add a few more details.
1) your thesis describes the commercial and its rhetorical strategies, but it doesn't have enough detail.
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3)It is just an observation.
4)your thesis is too simplistic and you should add a few more details.